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*Note:* These entries reflect review comments posted against the Liaison Review of D3 and D3a.


%ACTION{ closed="2013-10-14" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000019" who="Main.StevenDovich" }% D4: Make backwards compatibility of deprecated keys implementation defined %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000020" who="Main.DaveGraubart" }% Recommend that tool vendors provide pointer to licensing reference implementation %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2014-05-09" closer="" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" notify="" state="closed" uid="000021" who="Main.StevenDovich" }% D5: Include example encryption envelope %ENDACTION%

%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000022" who="Main.StevenDovich" }% Recommend that tool vendors provide pointer to licensing reference implementation %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000023" who="Main.StevenDovich" }% Include example encryption envelope %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000024" who="Main.StevenDovich" }% Should the inline key format be deprecated %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000025" who="Main.StevenDovich" }% The certificate format should be described as mandatory %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-10-21" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000026" who="Main.StevenDovich" }% D4: What is expected of a tool vendor if certificates are presented %ENDACTION%


%ACTION{ closed="2014-04-14" closer="" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" notify="" state="closed" uid="000027" who="Main.DaveGraubart" }% FUTURE: Use licensed decrypt rights to help manage key revocation %ENDACTION%


%ACTION{ closed="2013-05-20" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000028" who="Main.JohnShields" }% Make version pragma levels more explicit %ENDACTION%

%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000029" who="" }% 5.1.2 Clarify who selects algorithm %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000030" who="" }% 5.1.2 Expand "rsa" reference to full label %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-10-07" closer="" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" notify="" state="closed" uid="000031" who="" }% D4: 5.3.1.2 Drop digital signature references pending future PAR (DSA deprecation?) %ENDACTION%

%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000032" who="" }% 5 Limit described used cases to: Digital Env, Digital Env w/ licensing, and Tool Secret key for legacy support %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000033" who="" }% 5.1.2 Clarify requirements on encryption tools for version 1 vs version 2 to put keyrings in context %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000034" who="Main.StevenDovich" }% KeyMgmt Clarify the conformance expectations for the key exchange formats ie. support for pragma (REQ) vs standard (OPT) exchange %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-10-21" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000035" who="Main.StevenDovich" }% D4: 6.all KeyMgmt Clarify via recommendation that tools are required to disclose what exchange rules they support. %ENDACTION%

%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000036" who="Main.JarekKaczynski" }% InterOperability Incorporate John's version pragma rewrite %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000037" who="Main.DaveGraubart" }% InterOperability Provide Steven with details on conflicting encryption envelope requirements %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-12-09" closer="" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" notify="" state="closed" uid="000038" who="Main.StevenDovich" }% D4: 1.0 FrontMatter 1801 updates, External standard references (IEC vs IEEE for 1076) %ENDACTION%


%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000039" who="" }% InterOperability Remove DSA and DiffieHellman recommendations %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000040" who="" }% InterOperability  Forward reference to KeyMgmt to avoid use case conflicts %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-11-15" closer="" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" notify="" state="closed" uid="000041" who="Main.DaveGraubart" }% D4: 5.3.2.2 Reconcile internal licensing statements w/ license management clause %ENDACTION%

%ACTION{ closed="2013-11-15" closer="" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" notify="" state="closed" uid="000042" who="Main.DaveGraubart" }% D4: 5.3.2.2 Move Rationale to LicenseMgmt and make deprecation normative %ENDACTION%

%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000043" who="" }% 5.3.5 needs to be deleted as an undocumented use case %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-10-21" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000044" who="" }% D4: 6.3 Need more context to justify since not relevant to any recommended use cases %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-10-21" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000045" who="" }% D4: 6.4.1.4.XXX include recommendations or revise %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2013-10-21" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000046" who="" }% D4: 6.4.1.5 Revise recommendations for public key distribution %ENDACTION%
%ACTION{ closed="2014-05-09" closer="" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" notify="" state="closed" uid="000047" who="Main.DaveGraubart" }% D5: 8.7.3 What is a "licensed entity", need definition %ENDACTION%



%ACTION{ closed="2013-09-23" closer="Main.StevenDovich" created="2013-05-06" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" state="closed" uid="000048" who="" }% InterOperability  Forward reference to KeyMgmt to avoid use case conflicts %ENDACTION%

%ACTION{ closed="2014-05-09" closer="" created="2013-09-23" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" notify="" state="closed" uid="000057" who="" }% D5: AllClauses Review for missing examples as of the D4 draft %ENDACTION%


%ACTION{ closed="2014-04-14" closer="" created="2013-09-23" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" notify="" state="closed" uid="000056" who="Main.DaveGraubart" }% D5: 7.0 RightsMgmt Resolve key_block vs rights_block organization %ENDACTION%



%ACTION{ closed="2014-05-09" closer="" created="2013-10-14" creator="Main.StevenDovich" due="" notify="" state="closed" uid="000058" who="Main.StevenDovich" }% D5: AllClauses Review pragma structure for both version 1 and 2, Prerequisite for developing examples %ENDACTION%



-- Main.StevenDovich - 2013-05-06
Topic revision: r14 - 2014-05-09 - 23:26:35 - DaveGraubart
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